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Character study of Ianto, unbetaed so the mistakes are all my fault

Jack/Ianto, humor, angst, bossyIanto

Completed 6 hours before Cyberwoman aired.

Rating: PG with implied sex (I can't write sex scenes. Sorry.)

Word count: lots

Disclaimer: These guys belong to much better writers. I'm just practicing.

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_eyesthatstare
Nov. 6th, 2006 10:29 pm (UTC)
I love it!! :D
crabby_lioness
Nov. 7th, 2006 04:34 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
onigaminanashi
Nov. 9th, 2006 03:52 am (UTC)
You broke my brain with the sheer hotness of Ianto/Jack, and then you broke my heart with the writing.

And then almost broke my computer with this:
"Ah, you're so Welsh."

"Damn straight."


My nose and my computer do not appreciate Diet Pepsi being sprayed all over the keyboard.

Great stuff. I hope to see more soon! ^_^
crabby_lioness
Dec. 11th, 2006 02:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
pet_lunatic
Nov. 9th, 2006 07:22 am (UTC)
*Loves* :D Hope to see more! This is hot and funny and gorgeous. I love your Ianto.
crabby_lioness
Dec. 11th, 2006 03:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
zaccidents
Nov. 9th, 2006 09:15 am (UTC)
That was great!
crabby_lioness
Dec. 11th, 2006 03:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
kohlrimmedeye
Nov. 9th, 2006 01:38 pm (UTC)
This is lovely!


He knew how to make Jack efficient, productive, and on time. He knew how to scan the news sources for suspicious activity. He knew how to get their team where they needed to be with what they needed to have before the really bad problems emerged. He knew how to keep Owen in line and keep Tosh on task. He knew how to balance the books and how to cover their tracks. He knew how to protect Jack and the others from the attention of the local authorities and the more dangerous attention of Torchwood London. He knew where to file every scrap of paperwork and every inch of equipment. He knew the best places to get takeaway and the best places to dispose of the bodies. He knew how to manage the cover business so it raised no questions and even made a profit.

I think you may have made me fall in love with Ianto even more. :D

x
crabby_lioness
Nov. 9th, 2006 02:03 pm (UTC)
It's almost impossible not to love Ianto.
femme_slash_fan
Nov. 9th, 2006 10:10 pm (UTC)
That was... incredible... Oh no.... does that mean I have a new OTP... *dies* AGH!

crabby_lioness
Dec. 11th, 2006 03:10 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
(no subject) - femme_slash_fan - Dec. 11th, 2006 05:02 pm (UTC) - Expand
hugglewolf
Nov. 10th, 2006 04:39 pm (UTC)
That was beautiful.

From watching Cyberwoman, I saw a different Ianto from what I'd expected. He came across as something of an outsider, part of the team but not part of the team. Yet, in watching from the sidelines he may know them better than if he was out there with them. Just a thought, but I think you captured some of that here and how he used that knowledge.

This was fabulous. I love your background for Ianto, and how he approaches bridging the gap with Jack in his typically methodical way. And Ianto taking charge in the bedroom even as he learns from Jack? Dominant Ianto is hot!

And yes, I think that would be quite the hickey.

Well done, thanks for sharing.
crabby_lioness
Nov. 10th, 2006 05:09 pm (UTC)
Hey, Jack desperately needs some down time. In more ways than one....
oz_the_bobble
Nov. 26th, 2006 05:29 pm (UTC)
*wibbles at the fic* Love. PURE love.

Sorry I'm not constructive... *creeps away*
crabby_lioness
Nov. 26th, 2006 06:18 pm (UTC)
You're helping construct my ego! Thanks!
toscas_kiss
Jan. 7th, 2007 11:25 pm (UTC)
Lovely! A very nice character piece. :-)
crabby_lioness
Jan. 8th, 2007 02:14 am (UTC)
Thank you!
hpstrangelove
Feb. 10th, 2007 04:41 pm (UTC)
I just found your journal - I finally finished watching all the Torchwood episodes and started looking around for some slash fics...I really like your stuff, and I especially like this one. I'm working my way thought your other fics, in case you're wonder who I am (friending so I don't miss an update).

Great job.
crabby_lioness
Feb. 11th, 2007 01:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I'm really fond of this one.
psyko_kittie
Apr. 18th, 2007 09:03 pm (UTC)
Wonderful... ^_^
crabby_lioness
Apr. 19th, 2007 12:03 am (UTC)
Thank you!
missthingsplace
Oct. 20th, 2008 12:33 pm (UTC)
Brilliant!
silentstep
Dec. 25th, 2008 11:01 am (UTC)
Oh, I love this. Suddenly I'm seeing Ianto in a whole new light. Thank you, it's been a while since a fic has been able to give me a whole new perspective like that.
verasteine
Apr. 12th, 2009 02:10 pm (UTC)
Enjoyed this a lot. Favouriting it!
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